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|STORY n°||2 - (4 Votes)|
|STORY TITLE||CARRIE vs CINDY|
|WRITER'S NAME||Cindy Patterson and Carrie Smith|
We have been talking about having a fight for a long time. Finally Carrie got on an airplane and flew to Louisiana.
She drove out to the house and stayed with us for a few days. This would be her first real boxing match.
She knew me and Billy had a boxing ring in our garage, and that I had been challenging her to a fight for this last year.
Finally she drove up to our door in a rent car, we hugged and then took her stuff to the guest room. I showed her the ring.
We shopped and had fun together until that Saturday, when we prepared for our fight :
carrie196: butterflies in my tummy, sitting in my white thong and tshirt all my gear laid out, I pace back and forth,
I pick up my red everlast trunks with white trim and slip them on, then slide on my red sports bra,
looking in the mirror, nauseous
jawpuncher: I've slipped on my trunks, which seem a little skimpy today, and now my bra top over my chest protector...
I do side bends and back and over to loosten up...I throw punches into the air to begin sweating some, then I sit down
on the bed and put on my socks and begin lacing up my boots. I've already had my neighbor plait my hair and now it trails
back into a braid down my back...I look at myself in the mirror and try to smile...Billy comes into the room with wraps,
takes a chair and places it in front of me and gently pushes my shoulders against the wall..."Rest as much as you can, doll"
he says, taking my right hand and beginning to wrap it..."your going to need it"...
carrie196: I lace up my white shin high boots, hair in a pony tail, I rub baby oil on my shoulders and abs, then smire vasaline
on my face, I wash my hands and wrap my hands then start my stretching routine
jawpuncher: Billy finishes wrapping my hands, he then takes the gloves and opens the laces wide, slipping them on and then
taking his time lacing them up...when he is finished he knocks his nuckles togther, i back my gloves together, hearing the air
being squeezed out of them with every hit...the sound of a boxing glove hitting someone hard...
carrie196: I laced my gloves up, needing Billy to tape them for me before I get in the ring, throwing combos, getting loose,
looking at myself, feeling I'm ready
jawpuncher: Billy finishes taping my gloves, I lie down on the bed and try to get my breathing under control as he leaves
to go help you with your wraps and gloves...
carrie196: I look at Billy holding out my wrists asking him nicly if he will tape them, I ask if you are ready
jawpuncher: suddenly I see Billy's friends outside...I yell loud enough for them to hear that they need to let themselves in...
Sam and Everett who have come to help us with the fight. they come to the bedroom door and see me lying on the bed,
they smile, a little too much (men) and then I tell them that you are going to need a corner man...
carrie196: I grab my white mouthguard and walk out wondering what all the comotion is
jawpuncher: I leave the bedroom and see you, I come over to you and wrap my arms around you and give you a big hug...
good luck sweetie...
carrie196: I hug you back, you too hun, lets do this
jawpuncher: Billy comes out and openes the door to the garage and flips on the light. He motions for Sam to work your corner
and for Everett to play referee... he then opens the ropes up and i slip in, getting up on my toes and beginning
to work up a sweat...
carrie196: I walk up the steps and go through the ropes to my corner pacing back and forth
jawpuncher: Billy smears vaseline on my face and begins massaging my shoulders..."this is it, sweetie...the big fight...
and she looks ready, I hate to say!" I nod at him and give him a kiss, he then gives me a drink of water and then I open
my mouth for my mouthguard...he then leaves the ring and then leans over the ropes to continue massaging my shoulders,
I lean back into the ropes...
jawpuncher: I'm pumped, I'm ready, I'm strong....
carrie196:: I get a drink and rinse, looking across at you, focused and ready, trying to stare through you. Banging my gloves
I ask for my mouth guard
jawpuncher: Sam places a really good mouthguard into your mouth, it like the one that I'm wearing that protects your lower
teeth too but it looks like we have big black things in our mouths...
carrie196: I start to alk oit rolling my shoulders, sizing you up
jawpuncher: I wait for the bell...Billy goes over to a cd player and starts it...it takes a few moments but then suddenly...
carrie196: I hear it, raising my gloves,i I feint a left jab then swing a right uppercut at your abs and follow with a right hook
to your arm trying to cramp it
jawpuncher: I come out at the bell, gloves up, flexing my abs...oww!...I nearly shout as your punch stuns the upper part
of my arm...iI move back and begin moving my arm
up and down to get the circulation through it...
carrie196: I follow you in and feint a right hook at your head, I then throw a left hook at your ribs, then throw
a right uppercut at your sternum
jawpuncher: I duck to my right, my guard is not really up...oof!...taking your punch to my ribs...huuh!...
hearing myself grunt from your body punch...
jawpuncher: "cover up, cover up!" Billy shouts from our corner...I back up and hit the ropes, then before Billy can scream
I slip to my left and get away...guard
up this time as i keep away from you...
carrie196: I shuffle my feet trying to stay with you so your on the ropes, I go head hunting with a right hook at your ear then
a left uppercut at your chin
jawpuncher: seeing you move in for me I duck behind my gloves...oww!...taking your punch to the side of my head and
catching some of my ear...hnnh!...my gloves shoved up into my nose from your uppercut..."keep moving!...i
I hear Billy shout...i
I move to take a step back to my right...
carrie196: I follow you to your right, I throw a short left at your liver, then snap a quick left cross at your chin trying
to corner you
jawpuncher: hnnh!...taking the body punch...but then I duck underneath your left and at the same time loop a high right
toward your exposed left jaw, then some inside with
a straight punch toward the center of your stomach...
carrie196: ughnn my head snaps back, spit flies from my mouth, sweat sprays off my abs as I grunt out, buzzed,
I throw a stiff right at your temple then go for a clinch
jawpuncher: hnnh!...taking your punch to my head as the sweat flies...you come in and tie me up... I try to twist my body
to get you up against the ropes...
ughnn I grab on struggling grinding my head against yours,cupping your back
(yes) they leave us there struggling for a while, then the bell sounds...
Everett comes over and separates us...
I walk back to my corner and sit, mouthguard out, rising with water, looking at
jawpuncher: Billy looks me over, massages my left arm and encourages me to watch myself...iI take a drink,
he rups more vaseline on my face and
I get ready for the bell..
I stand up, mouthguard in, raising my gloves moving out
I move out, my guard up and ready...smiling at you...
I feint a right jab at your eye then swing a left and right uppercut in at your
waistband grunting out
jawpuncher: I lean away from your right...ooof!!!...your punch catches me in low in the stomach, bending me over...
bring my arms in to cover up as I open my mouth to
carrie196: I hold your shoulder and throw a right uppercut just under your bra line then i pivot trying to catch your chin
with a left uppercut
jawpuncher: hnnh!...taking your punch to my chest...aah!...feeling my gloves shoved into my face from blocking your
uppercut...I push away from you and move back...
carrie196: I move after you, I paw at you with my left glove looking for the opening to crash my right hook against
jawpuncher: I move back...reaching out to try to block you...huuh!...taking your punch to my cheek, snapping my head
and covering us with sweat...iI move back and my butt
comes up against the ropes...
I feint a right hook to your body then throw a left hook at your eye, trying to
pour it on
I flex my abs...hnnh!...my head snaps from your punch...I lean over and really
hide behind my gloves now!...
carrie196: I take a deep breath and try to drive a left uppercut up into your liver, then i try to crash a right against your
waistband grunting out with effort
jawpuncher: oow!...hnnh...my arms get really battered as they take the power of your punches...iI stay crouched and tight...
hoping to hear the bell soon!...
sweat burning my eyes as I breath hard trying to smash a right hook into your
hnnh!...my head gets pounded from your punch, the sweat flying all over...I
begin to see spots and then...
I walk back to my corner and sit,asking for water trying to catch my breath
jawpuncher: I make my way to my corner and flop down on my stool. Billy takes my mouthguard and looks reallly worried...
"what happend? where did you training go?!!" I shake my head and just gulp the water he hold up to my lips...i
I shake my head and then gasp for air as he pours the ice water over my head..."you have to get in there and do some
work on her, baby...or your sleeping on the canvas tonight!" I take in a few deep breaths, take my mouthguard and then
get up off my stool...the ringing has died down
ready for this, I tell myself...
carrie196: I look across at you as I stand, you look wet and tired, not sure though, I raise my gloves taking my mouthguard
taking deep breaths
DING!...iI come out of my corner slowly...waiting for your to come at me...
I move up and snap out 2 left jabs at your eye then swing a right jab at your
other eye trying to back you up
jawpuncher: I lean back and to my left, my right glove blocking your jabs, then I duck down as your right swishes over
the top of my
head...I jab with my left at your chin
and then step in with a right hook toward your solar plexus...
ummppffff,i I stumble to my left a bit grunting out my breath, I swing a wild left
hook at your temple
jawpuncher: I duck underneath your arm as your punch goes wild...hook a left up in toward the middle of your stomach
and then a quick right cross toward your chin...
carrie196: ughnnn sweat sprays off my tummy, then off my hair i wobble backing up,confused, I go back to basics, hurting,
snap out 2 left jabs at your eye the a right hook at
jawpuncher: I hear you grunt and I try to move in...hnnh!...my left eye gets pounded...ooof!...taking your punch on my ribs
drives the air from my mouth...iI move away and open my mouth for air...not strong enough to keep at you in close,
nibble away!" Billy shouts from our corner...
I move up and throw a left uppercut at your jaw then go for a clinch, get her
Carrie, get her Sam yells
I lean back from your punch, then feel your arms around me...I try to turn you
and push you into the ropes...
ughnnn I struggle pawing at you holding on
I try to push you back and shove you into the ropes...
ughnnn I struggle with you feeling the ropes on my back as I lean back
jawpuncher: I reach out and try to put my left glove behind your neck, pulling into you...reaching in and hooking a right hook
to pound you in the band of your trunks...once...twice...trying to sink my glove into your skinny stomach that shows
too much above your skimpy
carrie196: ughnnnn ummppgfff, sweat sprays off of my abs, mouthguard hanging as I gasp out my breath, ropes shaking,
I throw a right hook at your jaw
jawpuncher: hnnh!...the punch catches me good and I lean my head into you, opening my own mouth and come inside with
a right hook toward your solar plexus, then a looping
left toward your right ribs...
carrie196: ughnn I groan out,mmmppfff, sweat spraying off my body, feeling tired,i I take breaths, heart pounding I try
to slug you
back, toe to toe, I throw a straight left
and right punch at your abs
jawpuncher: ooof!...ooof!...not flexing my abs in time...I push off you and then come in with a looping right toward
your left eye,
then a straight left toward your
mouth and nose...trying to keep you pinned on the ropes...
carrie196: arghnn,my head snaps back,blood trickles from my nose, I raise my guard a little dazed, ropes shaking, I snap out
a left jab at your eye and a right hook at your
jawpuncher: hnnh!...head snapping back from the jab, eye really stinging now...ducking back from the right...
following up with
a left hook toward your right cheek and a
straight right toward your mouth...
carrie196: ughnn omppffff head snaps back again, mouth bloody, I fall back against the ropes then move up and try
to grab on for a clinch
jawpuncher: I bring my arms together and come in with a right uppercut aimed at the bottom of your chin, really putting
my weight behind it...
carrie196: ughnnn, blood spills from my mouth onto you, my eyes go glossy,leaning on the ropes,
not sure how you came back
jawpuncher: seeing you really hurt...not wanting to see you like this...coming in with a right hook toward the middle
carrie196: I grab the rope to keep up and use them to get back to my corner and i sit,
bloody mouthguard out, dizzy
jawpuncher: I move back to my corner and fall down on my stool, Billy is on me in a second and pulls out my mouthguard
and cools me down...I breathe deep and then take a drink...he whispers to me and i nod my head...
smiling now for the first time in
Sam clean up my mouth and face, icing my cheek, trying to recouperate in my corner
jawpuncher: I open my mouth for my mouthguard and then get up off my stool...all I need is a really big crowd now,
think to myself, I chew on my mouthguard and wait for
I get up Sam adjusts my trunks and slips my mouthguard in, I raise my gloves
I reach out and for you to touch my glove...
I touch your gloves looking at you
I then step back and smile at you...I've waited a long time for this!...
carrie196: butterflies again, not sure what your thinking, I raise my gloves and snap out a left jab at your eye and a right
uppercut at your chin
jawpuncher: i duck your jab and take a quick step back from your uppercut..all the guys yell...oooh!...at how close you came...
I then raise my gloves and continue moving back...
carrie196: I move up at you, tired but determined,i I throw a left hook at your ribs and a right hook at your temple
jawpuncher: I block your left with my right arm...then block your right with my raised left, then slide my left arm inside
to try to hit you with a straight left to your
right cheek and then lean in with a straight right toward your nose...
oughn huhno, blood spraying from my mouth again all over you,i I stiffen up and
throw a left hook at your ear
jawpuncher: seeing the blood coming from you shock me for ase...hnnh!...my ears begin to ring again when your left hits
the side of my head...I step back and then come in with a right cross at your left cheek,
then a looping left toward the center
of your face...
ughnnn my head snapping back and forth, I groan out ughn I try to uppercut your
chin with my right
jawpuncher: I'm in too close and suddenly my ears explode in ringing as my head snaps up and I see the sweat explode
off my head just before my eyes close...I'm leaning hard against the ropes, not really steady on my feet, with my gloves
held open and my
mouth open for air...everything is suddenly strange and dizzy like ive been in a
I try to crunch a straight left into your belly button, then a throw a short
right hook at your chin
jawpuncher: oooof!...your punch lands in my stomach driving the air out of me and making me open my mouth and
drop my gloves...hnnh!...my head gets spun around and suddenly I see the ring lights...then I slip down the ropes and
fall on my left side...suddenly
very dizzy, can't really lift my head...
looking down at you, getting yelled at to move to the corner i do so, leaning
the lights keep swimming in my vision as i try to lift my head...just too dizzy...
kneels over you,
ref kneels over you,
fingers out, he yells:
jawpuncher: I reach out and grab the bottom rope and try pulling myself up..."stay down, baby...don't try"...
Billy says quietly
to me from our corner...i lean back and close my eyes...
to me from our corner...i lean back and close my eyes...
thinking what a good time we had togther this week...not really caring that I lost this fight right now...
I lean back in shock, is she really out I wonder, in agony
DING DING DING DING....
Billy steps into the ring and leans down to look at me...Sam comes over to try
to give you a big hug...
I hug him raising my arm, spitting my mouthguard out
jawpuncher: Billy pulls out my mouthguard and puts a cold compress on my head...
after a few
minutes I'm strong enough to get to my feet...iI come over to give you a big hug...
I hug you tight, my body killing, looking at you
jawpuncher: I lean back in your arms and smile at you...then hug you close again...omg, I whisper in your ear...
what a fight!
I hug you, hrts to smile, your the best Cindy, the best I
spent the next day in bed, with Carrie at my side
I spent the next day in bed, with Carrie at my side
to take care of me. I got really tired of the ice laying there under the ice bags but she shushed me and made me do it.
What was I supposed to do ? Fight her again ? And when we walked to the door the next day and she waved as she drove
away I knew that
was exactly what would happen…there would be a next time.
how did you win this??????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I got lucky lol
no you didnt!
you hurt me early in the fight, and the uppercut just was too much
omg but your face was bloody
I wasn't gonna last much longer
no it wasn't
Denav is going to love this one
in a daze lol
you are so much fun to fight
so are you :)
Billy is gonna like this one giggles