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STORY n° 2 -  (4 Votes)
STORY TITLE CARRIE vs CINDY
WRITER'S NAME Cindy Patterson and Carrie Smith
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We have been talking about having a fight for a long time. Finally Carrie got on an airplane and flew to Louisiana.

She drove out to the house and stayed with us for a few days. This would be her first real boxing match.

She knew me and Billy had a boxing ring in our garage, and that I had been challenging her to a fight for this last year.

Finally she drove up to our door in a rent car, we hugged and then took her stuff to the guest room. I showed her the ring.

We shopped and had fun together until that Saturday, when we prepared for our fight : 

carrie196: butterflies in my tummy, sitting in my white thong and tshirt all my gear laid out, I pace back and forth,

I pick up my red everlast trunks with white trim and slip them on, then slide on my red sports bra,

looking in the mirror, nauseous

jawpuncher: I've slipped on my trunks, which seem a little skimpy today, and now my bra top over my chest protector...

I do side bends and back and over to loosten up...I throw punches into the air to begin sweating some, then I sit down

on the bed and put on my socks and begin lacing up my boots. I've already had my neighbor plait my hair and now it trails

back into a braid down my back...I look at myself in the mirror and try to smile...Billy comes into the room with wraps,

takes a chair and places it in front of me and gently pushes my shoulders against the wall..."Rest as much as you can, doll"

he says, taking my right hand and beginning to wrap it..."your going to need it"...

carrie196: I lace up my white shin high boots, hair in a pony tail, I rub baby oil on my shoulders and abs, then smire vasaline

on my face, I wash my hands and wrap my hands then start my stretching routine

jawpuncher: Billy finishes wrapping my hands, he then takes the gloves and opens the laces wide, slipping them on and then

taking his time lacing them up...when he is finished he knocks his nuckles togther, i back my gloves together, hearing the air

being squeezed out of them with every hit...the sound of a boxing glove hitting someone hard...

carrie196: I laced my gloves up, needing Billy to tape them for me before I get in the ring, throwing combos, getting loose,

looking at myself, feeling I'm ready

jawpuncher: Billy finishes taping my gloves, I lie down on the bed and try to get my breathing under control as he leaves

to go help you with your wraps and gloves...

carrie196: I look at Billy holding out my wrists asking him nicly if he will tape them, I ask if you are ready

jawpuncher: suddenly I see Billy's friends outside...I yell loud enough for them to hear that they need to let themselves in...

Sam and Everett who have come to help us with the fight. they come to the bedroom door and see me lying on the bed,

they smile, a little too much (men) and then I tell them that you are going to need a corner man...

carrie196: I grab my white mouthguard and walk out wondering what all the comotion is

jawpuncher: I leave the bedroom and see you, I come over to you and wrap my arms around you and give you a big hug...

good luck sweetie...

carrie196: I hug you back, you too hun, lets do this

jawpuncher: Billy comes out and openes the door to the garage and flips on the light. He motions for Sam to work your corner

and for Everett to play referee... he then opens the ropes up and i slip in, getting up on my toes and beginning

to work up a sweat...

carrie196: I walk up the steps and go through the ropes to my corner pacing back and forth

jawpuncher: Billy smears vaseline on my face and begins massaging my shoulders..."this is it, sweetie...the big fight...

and she looks ready, I hate to say!" I nod at him and give him a kiss, he then gives me a drink of water and then I open

my mouth for my mouthguard...he then leaves the ring and then leans over the ropes to continue massaging my shoulders,

I lean back into the ropes...

jawpuncher: I'm pumped, I'm ready, I'm strong....

carrie196:: I get a drink and rinse, looking across at you, focused and ready, trying to stare through you. Banging my gloves

together, I ask for my mouth guard

jawpuncher: Sam places a really good mouthguard into your mouth, it like the one that I'm wearing that protects your lower

teeth too but it looks like we have big black things in our mouths...

carrie196: I start to alk oit rolling my shoulders, sizing you up

jawpuncher: I wait for the bell...Billy goes over to a cd player and starts it...it takes a few moments but then suddenly...

DING!...and it happens!...  

carrie196: I hear it, raising my gloves,i I feint a left jab then swing a right uppercut at your abs and follow with a right hook

to your arm trying to cramp it  

jawpuncher: I come out at the bell, gloves up, flexing my abs...oww!...I nearly shout as your punch stuns the upper part

of my arm...iI move back and begin moving my arm up and down to get the circulation through it...  

carrie196: I follow you in and feint a right hook at your head, I then throw a left hook at your ribs, then throw 

a right uppercut at your sternum  

jawpuncher: I duck to my right, my guard is not really up...oof!...taking your punch to my ribs...huuh!...

hearing myself grunt from your body punch...  

jawpuncher: "cover up, cover up!" Billy shouts from our corner...I back up and hit the ropes, then before Billy can scream 

at me I slip to my left and get away...guard up this time as i keep away from you...  

carrie196: I shuffle my feet trying to stay with you so your on the ropes, I go head hunting with a right hook at your ear then 

a left uppercut at your chin  

jawpuncher: seeing you move in for me I duck behind my gloves...oww!...taking your punch to the side of my head and 

catching some of my ear...hnnh!...my gloves shoved up into my nose from your uppercut..."keep moving!...i

I hear Billy shout...i I move to take a step back to my right...  

carrie196: I follow you to your right, I throw a short left at your liver, then snap a quick left cross at your chin trying 

to corner you  

jawpuncher: hnnh!...taking the body punch...but then I duck underneath your left and at the same time loop a high right 

toward your exposed left jaw, then some inside with a straight punch toward the center of your stomach...  

carrie196: ughnn my head snaps back, spit flies from my mouth, sweat sprays off my abs as I grunt out, buzzed, 

I throw a stiff right at your temple then go for a clinch  

jawpuncher: hnnh!...taking your punch to my head as the sweat flies...you come in and tie me up... I try to twist my body 

to get you up against the ropes...  

carrie196: ughnn I grab on struggling grinding my head against yours,cupping your back   

jawpuncher: (yes) they leave us there struggling for a while, then the bell sounds...  

DING DING DING…  

…and Everett comes over and separates us...  

carrie196: I walk back to my corner and sit, mouthguard out, rising with water, looking at you, controlling my breathing  

jawpuncher: Billy looks me over, massages my left arm and encourages me to watch myself...iI take a drink, 

he rups more vaseline on my face and I get ready for the bell..  

carrie196: I stand up, mouthguard in, raising my gloves moving out  

DING!...

jawpuncher: I move out, my guard up and ready...smiling at you...  

carrie196: I feint a right jab at your eye then swing a left and right uppercut in at your waistband grunting out  

jawpuncher: I lean away from your right...ooof!!!...your punch catches me in low in the stomach, bending me over...

I bring my arms in to cover up as I open my mouth to breathe...  

carrie196: I hold your shoulder and throw a right uppercut just under your bra line then i pivot trying to catch your chin 

with a left uppercut

jawpuncher: hnnh!...taking your punch to my chest...aah!...feeling my gloves shoved into my face from blocking your 

uppercut...I push away from you and move back...  

carrie196: I move after you, I paw at you with my left glove looking for the opening to crash my right hook against 

your cheek  

jawpuncher: I move back...reaching out to try to block you...huuh!...taking your punch to my cheek, snapping my head 

and covering us with sweat...iI move back and my butt comes up against the ropes...  

carrie196: I feint a right hook to your body then throw a left hook at your eye, trying to pour it on  

jawpuncher: I flex my abs...hnnh!...my head snaps from your punch...I lean over and really hide behind my gloves now!...  

carrie196: I take a deep breath and try to drive a left uppercut up into your liver, then i try to crash a right against your 

waistband grunting out with effort  

jawpuncher: oow!...hnnh...my arms get really battered as they take the power of your punches...iI stay crouched and tight...

hoping to hear the bell soon!...

carrie196: sweat burning my eyes as I breath hard trying to smash a right hook into your temple

jawpuncher: hnnh!...my head gets pounded from your punch, the sweat flying all over...I begin to see spots and then...

DING DING DING…

carrie196: I walk back to my corner and sit,asking for water trying to catch my breath  

jawpuncher: I make my way to my corner and flop down on my stool. Billy takes my mouthguard and looks reallly worried...

"what happend? where did you training go?!!" I shake my head and just gulp the water he hold up to my lips...i

I shake my head and then gasp for air as he pours the ice water over my head..."you have to get in there and do some 

work on her, baby...or your sleeping on the canvas tonight!" I take in a few deep breaths, take my mouthguard and then 

get up off my stool...the ringing has died down now... I'm ready for this, I tell myself...  

carrie196: I look across at you as I stand, you look wet and tired, not sure though, I raise my gloves taking my mouthguard 

in, taking deep breaths  

jawpuncher: DING!...iI come out of my corner slowly...waiting for your to come at me...  

carrie196: I move up and snap out 2 left jabs at your eye then swing a right jab at your other eye trying to back you up  

jawpuncher: I lean back and to my left, my right glove blocking your jabs, then I duck down as your right swishes over 

the top of my head...I jab with my left at your chin and then step in with a right hook toward your solar plexus...

carrie196: ummppffff,i I stumble to my left a bit grunting out my breath, I swing a wild left hook at your temple  

jawpuncher: I duck underneath your arm as your punch goes wild...hook a left up in toward the middle of your stomach 

and then a quick right cross toward your chin...  

carrie196: ughnnn sweat sprays off my tummy, then off my hair i wobble backing up,confused, I go back to basics, hurting, 

I snap out 2 left jabs at your eye the a right hook at your ribs  

jawpuncher: I hear you grunt and I try to move in...hnnh!...my left eye gets pounded...ooof!...taking your punch on my ribs 

drives the air from my mouth...iI move away and open my mouth for air...not strong enough to keep at you in close,

yet..."good!...good!...just nibble away!" Billy shouts from our corner...  

carrie196: I move up and throw a left uppercut at your jaw then go for a clinch, get her Carrie, get her Sam yells  

jawpuncher: I lean back from your punch, then feel your arms around me...I try to turn you and push you into the ropes...  

carrie196: ughnnn I struggle pawing at you holding on  

jawpuncher: I try to push you back and shove you into the ropes...  

carrie196: ughnnn I struggle with you feeling the ropes on my back as I lean back  

jawpuncher: I reach out and try to put my left glove behind your neck, pulling into you...reaching in and hooking a right hook

to pound you in the band of your trunks...once...twice...trying to sink my glove into your skinny stomach that shows 

too much above your skimpy trunks...  

carrie196: ughnnnn ummppgfff, sweat sprays off of my abs, mouthguard hanging as I gasp out my breath, ropes shaking, 

I throw a right hook at your jaw  

jawpuncher: hnnh!...the punch catches me good and I lean my head into you, opening my own mouth and come inside with 

a right hook toward your solar plexus, then a looping left toward your right ribs...  

carrie196: ughnn I groan out,mmmppfff, sweat spraying off my body, feeling tired,i I take breaths, heart pounding I try 

to slug you back, toe to toe, I throw a straight left and right punch at your abs  

jawpuncher: ooof!...ooof!...not flexing my abs in time...I push off you and then come in with a looping right toward 

your left eye,  then a straight left toward your mouth and nose...trying to keep you pinned on the ropes...  

carrie196: arghnn,my head snaps back,blood trickles from my nose, I raise my guard a little dazed, ropes shaking, I snap out 

a left jab at your eye and a right hook at your jaw  

jawpuncher: hnnh!...head snapping back from the jab, eye really stinging now...ducking back from the right...

following up with a left hook toward your right cheek and a straight right toward your mouth...  

carrie196: ughnn omppffff head snaps back again, mouth bloody, I fall back against the ropes then move up and try 

to grab on for a clinch  

jawpuncher: I bring my arms together and come in with a right uppercut aimed at the bottom of your chin, really putting 

my weight behind it...  

carrie196: ughnnn, blood spills from my mouth onto you, my eyes go glossy,leaning on the ropes, 

not sure how you came back  

jawpuncher: seeing you really hurt...not wanting to see you like this...coming in with a right hook toward the middle 

of your stomach...then...  DING, DING, DING...  

carrie196: I grab the rope to keep up and use them to get back to my corner and i sit, 

my bloody mouthguard out, dizzy  

jawpuncher: I move back to my corner and fall down on my stool, Billy is on me in a second and pulls out my mouthguard 

and cools me down...I breathe deep and then take a drink...he whispers to me and i nod my head...

smiling now for the first time in the fight....  

carrie196: Sam clean up my mouth and face, icing my cheek, trying to recouperate in my corner  

jawpuncher: I open my mouth for my mouthguard and then get up off my stool...all I need is a really big crowd now, 

I think to myself, I chew on my mouthguard and wait for the bell...  

carrie196:: I get up Sam adjusts my trunks and slips my mouthguard in, I raise my gloves moving out  

jawpuncher: I reach out and for you to touch my glove...  

carrie196: I touch your gloves looking at you  

jawpuncher: I then step back and smile at you...I've waited a long time for this!...  

carrie196: butterflies again, not sure what your thinking, I raise my gloves and snap out a left jab at your eye and a right 

uppercut at your chin  

jawpuncher: i duck your jab and take a quick step back from your uppercut..all the guys yell...oooh!...at how close you came...

I then raise my gloves and continue moving back...  

carrie196: I move up at you, tired but determined,i I throw a left hook at your ribs and a right hook at your temple

jawpuncher: I block your left with my right arm...then block your right with my raised left, then slide my left arm inside 

to try to hit you with a straight left to your right cheek and then lean in with a straight right toward your nose...  

carrie196: oughn huhno, blood spraying from my mouth again all over you,i I stiffen up and throw a left hook at your ear  

jawpuncher: seeing the blood coming from you shock me for ase...hnnh!...my ears begin to ring again when your left hits 

the side of my head...I step back and then come in with a right cross at your left cheek, 

then a looping left toward the center of your face...  

carrie196: ughnnn my head snapping back and forth, I groan out ughn I try to uppercut your chin with my right  

jawpuncher: I'm in too close and suddenly my ears explode in ringing as my head snaps up and I see the sweat explode 

off my head just before my eyes close...I'm leaning hard against the ropes, not really steady on my feet, with my gloves 

held open and my mouth open for air...everything is suddenly strange and dizzy like ive been in a wreck...  

carrie196: I try to crunch a straight left into your belly button, then a throw a short right hook at your chin  

jawpuncher: oooof!...your punch lands in my stomach driving the air out of me and making me open my mouth and 

drop my gloves...hnnh!...my head gets spun around and suddenly I see the ring lights...then I slip down the ropes and 

fall on my left side...suddenly very dizzy, can't really lift my head...  

carrie196: looking down at you, getting yelled at to move to the corner i do so, leaning back, tired  

jawpuncher: the lights keep swimming in my vision as i try to lift my head...just too dizzy... ref kneels over you, 

fingers out, he yells:

ONE  

TWO  

THREE  

FOUR  

jawpuncher: I reach out and grab the bottom rope and try pulling myself up..."stay down, baby...don't try"...

Billy says quietly to me from our corner...i lean back and close my eyes...  

FIVE  

SIX  

SEVEN  

EIGHT  

jawpuncher: thinking what a good time we had togther this week...not really caring that I lost this fight right now...  

NINE  

TEN…YOURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR OUT !!!  

carrie196: I lean back in shock, is she really out I wonder, in agony  

DING DING DING DING DING....  

jawpuncher: Billy steps into the ring and leans down to look at me...Sam comes over to try to give you a big hug...  

carrie196: I hug him raising my arm, spitting my mouthguard out  

jawpuncher: Billy pulls out my mouthguard and puts a cold compress on my head...

after a few minutes I'm strong enough to get to my feet...iI come over to give you a big hug...  

carrie196: I hug you tight, my body killing, looking at you  

jawpuncher: I lean back in your arms and smile at you...then hug you close again...omg, I whisper in your ear...

what a fight!  

carrie196: I hug you, hrts to smile, your the best Cindy, the best I spent the next day in bed, with Carrie at my side

to take care of me. I got really tired of the ice laying there under the ice bags but she shushed me and made me do it. 

What was I supposed to do ? Fight her again ? And when we walked to the door the next day and she waved as she drove 

away I knew that was exactly what would happen…there would be a next time.  

The End  

jawpuncher: how did you win this??????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

jawpuncher: omg!  

carrie196: I got lucky lol  

jawpuncher: no you didnt! ... lol

carrie196: flexing lol  

jawpuncher: you hurt me early in the fight, and the uppercut just was too much  

jawpuncher: omg but your face was bloody  

carrie196: I wasn't gonna last much longer  

jawpuncher: no it wasn't  

jawpuncher: Denav is going to love this one  

carrie196: in a daze lol  

jawpuncher: you are so much fun to fight  

carrie196: so are you :)  

carrie196: Billy is gonna like this one giggles  

jawpuncher: lol………………………………………………………..  


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